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Post by ADMINISTRATOR ACCOUNT on Jan 26, 2009 5:49:59 GMT -6
I think that part should be changed anyways, (the last few paragraphs after that space) and I'll tell you why.
You are basically role-playing Littlestar here. I'm pretty sure I only heard Braveheart mentioned twice; when she was sent on patrol and when she caught the WindClan intruder. I want to see more of her in your post, please. [/blockquote]
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Post by whisper on Jan 26, 2009 9:38:02 GMT -6
Thanks! I will make sure to do that. I made her bio.
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Post by river on Jan 26, 2009 13:07:45 GMT -6
I think that part should be changed anyways, (the last few paragraphs after that space) and I'll tell you why.
You are basically role-playing Littlestar here. I'm pretty sure I only heard Braveheart mentioned twice; when she was sent on patrol and when she caught the WindClan intruder. I want to see more of her in your post, please. [/blockquote][/quote] I'll do that now.EDIT:Done It!
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Post by snowspirit on Jan 26, 2009 14:42:15 GMT -6
is the deputy of thunderclan taken?
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Post by ADMINISTRATOR ACCOUNT on Jan 26, 2009 14:55:08 GMT -6
Well, River has tried out, but you can try out as well if you'd like. [/blockquote]
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Post by snowspirit on Jan 28, 2009 21:32:14 GMT -6
OH YM GOSH!!!!! IM SO SORRY I HAVENT BEEN ON!!! IVE JUST BEEN SO BUSY! Can you tell me if this name is better? Meddie cat:Thunderclan: Silverbranch The Medicine Cat of Thunderclan opened her silvery-blue eyes to the shining of the morning sun. She gave a massive yawn and the light glinted off her large canines making them appear sharp and long. Shaking the small bits of loose moss from her pelt, she made her way out of her den. Her long, coat shimmered as her muscles rippled under it. Silverbranch was a small, and rather pretty she cat with large paws, long legs and a friendly disposition. She had barely stood up when she heard her clan-mates sounding frantic. A young warrior sped into her den almost knocking into Silverbranch. "Nightpaw!" she said in shock, why was this young tom in such a hurry? "Why are -" she started but got cut off by Nightpaw. "Silverbranch! Something is wrong with Solarkit come help please!" without even answering him she sped out and didn't stop until she got to the nursery. It was obvious from the moment she stepped in that Solarkit had greencough; she reeked of the scent. The young medicine cat looked at the mother, Mapleleaf, and spoke softly,” let me see her, I need to see what symptoms she has." Mapleleaf moved back quickly and Silverbranch inspected the kit. Solarkit had pus around her eyes, was wheezing and coughing, and had a fever. Silverwish quickly bolted out and back to her den to grab the necessary herbs to cure the young kit. She needed to cure the Greencough, feverfew to cool down the fever and ease any head pain the kit might have, and lavender to also help with the fever. Silverbranch put the herbs into a leaf so as not to get any germs she had on the herbs and snatched them up. The she-cat arrived at the nursery with the bundle and trotted over to the kit. Mapleleaf nudged the kit lightly to wake her up and with a slight struggle, the small tortoise shell opened her amber eyes. Silverbranch gently placed the leaf bundle down and laid down eye level with the kit. "Eat these and you will feel much better," she stated simply and with the little strength the kit had left, it bent and ate the parcel slowly. Solarkit's breathing eased and Silverbranch let out held breath; the herbs had taken effect quickly. She turned to Mapleleaf seeing the queen was a little frayed. The medicine cat trotted gracefully out the nursery and back to get some chamomile to calm the queen. "When Solarkit wakes up, feed her some milk and then give her some of this," she nudged the little white flowers with her paw,” if there is any left after you eat a bit to calm down." Silverbranch's voice flowed out silky and smooth as she described what Mapleleaf was to do, "do not get her too exhausted from physical actions or the Greencough will come back. If anything else happens come get me or send someone." The silver furred cat she-cat stood up and flicked her tail in a farewell and Mapleleaf dipped her head in gratitude and respect and licked up one of the flower heads as the successful medicine cat turned and walked out of the nursery. She walked up to the fresh-kill pile and selected a fish for herself and a rabbit for the queen and her kit. She padded back to the nursery, placed the prey in front of the Mapleleaf, and went back to her den to eat her morning meal. ~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~ Is that all i need?
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Post by ADMINISTRATOR ACCOUNT on Jan 31, 2009 10:22:08 GMT -6
We aren't having try-outs for deputies anymore; I made an annoucement about that. You can try out for Medicine Cat if you want to though. However, I don't think Lunarwish is an appropriate name. They probably wouldn't use it in the books. [/blockquote]
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Post by snowspirit on Feb 1, 2009 16:23:47 GMT -6
oh ok ill change it
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Post by swift on Feb 9, 2009 10:51:51 GMT -6
nightfeather » nightstar A shaky breath forced it’s way out of Nightstar’s mouth, her amber eyes were wide as she stared into the darkness all around her, the cold breeze of the night shivered down her spine. She was laying by the Moonstone and she had just received her nine lives from StarClan. Her mind whirled over the dream that she had just witnessed, nine cats of her past had descended upon her and given her the leader name and each life, the either shook her vision with pain until she was partially blind for a few moments of a life, where her body felt as light as a feather and as warm as a Leaf-Green day. The sudden wave of loneliness flowed through her ebony body, causing her to weakly scramble to her paws. She wanted to return to WindClan, her clan, so she could greet her loved ones. Her loving mate, Hailstorm and their kits were the main ones, but each cat was important to her now and she just wanted to return home, a wave of home-sickness washed over her. She padded swiftly away from the moonstone, looking back at the sacred rock with one golden glance, before dashing through the rocky tunnels, searching desperately for the exit. Even as her swift body carried her towards the open, it felt like moons before she burst out of mothermouth. Her ears twitched as she searched for Runningleaf, the WindClan medicine cat. She soon caught sight of her and padded silently over to her, feeling relieved to be in the company of a clanmate. She lightly pressed her nose into her flank, she did not feel like talking about what happened, the dream still vivid in her mind as she pulled away from the Medicine Cat, a weak smile on her face. “Okay, we should return home now..” She murmured softly, padding away from Runningleaf and towards the Thunderpath, which they had to cross to get to the moors.
After dashing across the Thunderpath, making sure that no monsters were coming, Nightstar slipped onto the moors of WindClan. She took a deep breath as the familiar scents of the moors flooded to her, as well as the tempting scent of rabbits. She glanced at Runningleaf, she knew she was not able to eat before she received her nine lives but now that it was over, she saw no problem in hunting for herself and her companion. After pacing silently through the grass, she soon caught sight of a plump rabbit, nibbling innocently on some fresh blades of grass. Her paws were light as she stalked towards the rabbit, her golden eyes gleamed in hunger as she paced towards the rabbit. A heartbeat later, the rabbit spotted Nightstar and immediately, she gave chase to the fleeing prey. In a few moments, she out paced the rabbit, stopping it in it’s tracks with her paws before swiftly ending it’s life with a quick bite to the neck. She dragged the fresh-kill towards Runningleaf and together, they shared the meal, Nightstar thanking StarClan for the fresh-kill. After she cleaned her jaws free of the rabbit, she turned to Runningleaf as she reminded her that she would need to name a deputy soon after they got back. In truth, Nightstar had forgotten about the naming a deputy and she slipped into deep thought as the two walked back to the camp. There were little cats who were able to qualify for the position for the deputy, one, was Hailstorm and the other Cougarclaw, both, she realised, were capable of becoming the deputy. She didn’t want to choose Hailstorm just because of her feelings for him and she hoped, the clan would see that she would choose their new deputy for their skills rather than the relationship she held with them.
Nightstar sighed in relief as she padded into the WindClan camp, she gazed around it with an affectionate look in her golden eyes. Soon, other cats came to greet her, calling her by her new name and she felt a sudden wave of pride and fear. This was all completely new to her, she had not been deputy so she knew nothing of what to do, all she had to go by, was the memory of Heatherstar and how she had dealt with the clan before she left to join StarClan. She would have to do the best she good, she thought grimly, hoping she would be able to be the leader that her clan deserved. And for that, she would need to appoint a deputy which would help her run the clan. After greeting her clan she broke away from the gathered cats and leapt on top of the Tall rock, the view from up there took her breath away, she knew she would have to get used to it. With a shaky breath, she started to address the clan, though all of them were practically gathered already. “All cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather around the Tall Rock for a clan meeting!” Her voice was a little shaky at first, though she composed herself quickly, taking a deep breath. “It is now time for me to appoint the new Deputy of WindClan.” She spoke, her golden gaze brushed through all the cats who stared up at her with wide and waiting eyes. Nightstar closed her eyes for less than a second, thinking about her choice once more, she was sure this was the right choice to make. Her smouldering amber eyes opened once more, ready to address the clan with a bright look on her features.
---- {If it's okay, IF she is appointed the leader. Could she be given the position after her kits are born, so she could give them to another Queen so she can become leader of WindClan, without being pregnant while beign the leader? xD}
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Post by hail on Feb 9, 2009 15:29:12 GMT -6
Hailstar
Hailstar was asleep in the warm moss of his den when a lot of noise was stirring around the camp. He then decided to go and take a look and could hear the loud noise of hissing and yowling. He quickly started to set foot out of the warm comfort of his den and go investigate as he made his way across the clearing he could see amongst his warriors and deputy was two of ThunderClan warriors. They were out of breath and tired from making their way from their camp. Hailstar looked at the two warriors and they both bowed their heads in respect for the leader.
He then said “what brings two cats from ThunderClan in to WindClans territory” one of the warriors took a deep breath before reply so he could get his breath back from his journey and said “RiverClan and ShadowClan are attacking are camp and Lightingstar sent us to get help” the other warrior then said “we have no one else to go to as a few of are warriors are injured and we are the last hope so will you help us” as they both bowed their heads in respect. Hailstar was amazed to see ThunderClan cats begging for his help and first said “you want me to risk my warriors and maybe one of my life’s to protect ThunderClan from this threat you have?” The two cats begging him but he turned away and started to walk back to his den. The two cats begged him by saying “Windclan please help us by the will of Starclan” Hailstar started to think about this and was thinking it would be played to his advantage. He then turned and faced the two warriors he started to wonder over to them and then said in a smug voice “fine we will help” he turned to his deputy and said “get me four of my warriors and we will set off to aid ThunderClan.
His deputy protested at what he said and then said to his leader “it could be a trap” the two cats from ThunderClan assured him that it was not a trap but he still demand to his deputy and his deputy had seen the look in his leaders eye that he knew what he was doing. Hailstar looked at his deputy and said “I want you to look after the camp and take good care of Nightfeather I treasure her deeply.” As he went over to the to pay his respects to his mate Nightfeather who was at the edge of the nursery with her four kits in front of her as she was catching sun to warm her and her kits he gave her a quick affectionate lick as he saw his warriors assumable and ready to go.
He then followed the two warrior cats from ThunderClan out through the moors and past the abandoned dens as they quicken their pace. He thought to himself may StarClan give me strength and watch over me and my warriors. The day was cold and started to rain and the clouds turned grey. His pelt was starting to become smooth as the rain soaked it through and he arrived in ThunderClans territory. He could see the camp and the two ThunderClan cats trying hard to keep up Hailstar yowled a battle cry to his warriors to assure them that even StarClan was with them. They all drew closer to the camp and could hear yowls of pain coming from the ThunderClan camp.
Hailstar entered the tunnel leading into ThunderClans camp and saw Snakestar and Rainstar was attacking the Thunderclans leader Littlestar and deputy. Hailstar unsheathed his claws and leaped for the leader of ShadowClan
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Post by ADMINISTRATOR ACCOUNT on Feb 9, 2009 16:35:09 GMT -6
You guys both had very good try-outs, but I have decided that Nightstar will be the leader of WindClan. (And yes, the whole kit thing is fine with me xD Make her have them soon, then)
Swift, you should update Nightfeather's bio. (:
Thank you for trying out, Hail! :3 [/blockquote]
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Post by ADMINISTRATOR ACCOUNT on Feb 20, 2009 16:47:01 GMT -6
GUYS we still need a ThunderClan and ShadowClan Medicine Cat! Those of you without High Positions, consider making one! =]
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Post by river on Feb 20, 2009 18:30:40 GMT -6
I could try and make a ShadowClan medicine cat...
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Post by ADMINISTRATOR ACCOUNT on Feb 20, 2009 20:24:39 GMT -6
If you don't want to, don't. But if you'd like to, go ahead. :3
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Post by snowspirit on Feb 28, 2009 21:38:16 GMT -6
I just finished my try-out for the medicine cat of thunderclan; look up at my earlier post.
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